Reflection #2/How my writing has evolved

In my writing, organization has always been an issue with me.  For years now I have had problems with my writings drifting in and out of topic.  Organization needs to start in the prewriting phase for me.  If I don’t start this process early, my writing will have no direction at all and ultimately the writing will suffer.  As far back as I can recall I have had a hard time with this.  Drifting continues to plague me even as we speak.

From the beginning of last semester when I was enrolled in ENF 2, a developmental English class, until now at the completion of English 111, my writing has slightly evolved in a way that I now feel that I am able to better compose my writings and I now feel that my thoughts and ideas tend to flow just a little easier.  This may not seem like much to some people, but for me it is a major step in the right direction.

I have also realized the importance of reading to better organize my thoughts and writing.  Reading acts as a guide or compass  for me as I start to develop ideas of what I intend to write about.  It has become obvious to me that I need to read as much as possible and if I continue to do that my writing processes and my overall writing will improve.  As I have written in weblog 4, reading is fundamental and it is the key to a better foundation and a better written presentation.  So I will continue to read and improve on my organization with the hopes of someday becoming a better writer.

Life! What’s In A Name?

What is life? One of the definitions that Oxford Dictionaries give is : The condition that distinguishes animals and plants from inorganic matter, including the capacity for growth, reproduction, functional activity, and continual change preceding death : a particular type or aspect of people’s existence. Well, rather than use a dictionary definition, I would like to pursue the true personal aspect of life. In the words of Forrest Gump, “Life is like a box of chocolates. You never know what you’re gonna get.”

I believe that life is all about choices. Everyday we are faced with hundreds if not thousands of choices that we must make in an effort to simply get through our day. For some, this task is somewhat of a challenge. To others, they seemingly float right through this process without any problems at all. For me however, the choices in my life seem to come at me, “a mile a minute”. But somehow I seem to make it through.

That word life carries all kinds of meanings for everyone who tries to live one.  For some, life can be unbearable.  A struggle so intense that they try and end it all.  For others, life is a joy.  Those people tend to be positive thinkers and have an idea of where they want go in life and have plotted a course to get to that point.  Then you have those people that live life somewhere in the middle.  I believe that most people fall into this category.  Those who confront everyday challenges one at a time and take the good with the bad.  They realize that from time to time, life will throw you a curve ball and you must do your best to maintain your composure and do what is best for their lives.

However we view life, we must all remember that we only have one life to live and for that reason we must try to make the best of it as it comes.  Realize that there will be ups and downs, highs and lows and find a way to maneuver around the problem spots.  If we could all do this, then all of our lives would be a little brighter.

Weblog #4: My Ideal Writing Class

Semester after semester,  year after year, high school and college students set out on a course to learn the correct way to compose an English sentence.  After those lessons, they must then focus their attention on paragraph structure and the proper way to form an essay or composition.  In this seemingly endless quest, the students will be faced with the task of finding the ideal writing class.  This class would involve creating the perfect form, selecting the best content and reading grammatically and structurally correct English literature.

In his essay which appeared in the New York Times titled Devoid of Content, Mr. Stanley Fish states that, “Most composition courses that American students take today emphasize content rather than form…” and that “Content is a lure and a delusion,…”.  He insists that “Form is the way.”  These statements made by Mr. Fish are twofold.  Most English composition classes do focus more on content than on form, however, composition courses should not focus solely on content or form.  When composing an essay, the two must be used simultaneously.  This gives you a greater chance of connecting with your audience and holding their attention.

Barry Feldman of Social Media Today writes, “The content you’re about to write is based on an idea, but it can’t be arbitrary.”  “Each chunk of content you create should be an ingredient in a big picture recipe”, Feldman states.  Selecting the best content should be one of the highlights of composition.  Sadly, it is often seen as one of the most difficult steps in the writing process.  In the end, it comes down to knowing your audience and having a working knowledge of the information you are attempting to bring forth.

The final piece of the puzzle when selecting the ideal writing class is reading.  Reading is truly fundamental.  Reading is the basis of writing.  In order to learn to write a coherent statement, we must first aspire to read.  Reading should be used as a guide for anyone attempting to understand and become fluent in writing English compositions.  In fact, according to the article entitled Importance of Reading Skills, Vicki Hoss of Demand Media writes, “Students with the necessary reading skills can later develop writing and language skills necessary for academic and professional success.”  Reading should be considered a life skill and not just used for English composition.  We should all read to live, then we may be able to write and understand the basics of English Composition.

Today, American high school and college students are tasked with making life altering decisions in their educational paths.  One of those decisions could become a bit easier if the proper approach is taken.  When selecting English writing classes, students will be better served if they can select a class that offers a combination approach to writing.  The course must combine not only content and form, it must highlight the importance of reading.  Reading, and comprehending what the author has written, provides the foundation for the ideal writing class.  But good luck finding that class.  Students will most likely have to take multiple classes to satisfy this requirement.  So, until we have one class that will encompass all of these needs, we must strive to find a balance between content and form, while we make it our mission to read as much as possible.  With that said; reading is the key.  Happy Reading!

I Write From Within

I often prefer to write about things that I have knowledge of or topics that I can somehow relate to from my previous experiences or endeavors. However, sometimes I too can have magical moments not unlike those moments that Bob Dylan speaks about in his interview with Ed Bradley from CBS News. Although, it seems that mine are few and far between.

My father would always say that his mind was constantly working, and I think that I have inherited that trait to some extent. Because of my active and ever churning mind, I must first slow myself down and try to focus on the topic at hand. This in itself can sometimes be a major event. If I am unsuccessful in my attempts to accomplish this first task, then my work will never take root and grow. I often feel as if I have “Writer’s Block”, simply because I have too many ideas floating around in this big ‘ole head of mine. But if I am successful, then the sky is the limit for me and my ideas.

Secondly, I try to place myself inside my writing, mentally. I feel that if I am able to open up and become a part of my writing, then the writing, itself, will become more personable and someone else may have a better chance to relate to what I am writing about. Doing this seems to allow my writings to have a better feel or flow to it. Without so much choppiness or confusion and it allows the reader to gain a more intimate feel while reading.

Lastly, I always try to make things interesting and easy to understand. I sometimes tend to drift while I am writing. Again, this is a sign of an active mind. So I must reign myself in and get back to the topic at hand without confusing or boring my readers to death in the process. I try to do this by glancing back at my topic from time-to-time to make sure that I am headed in the direction that I originally intended and the topic in which I have chosen is something that I, myself, would actually want to read about. If I am successful in implementing these ideas while writing, and if I can somehow impart a little of myself and my wisdom into my work, then I will normally end up writing something worth the read.

Weblog 3

National Book Foundation
ATTN: Mr. David Steinberger
90 Broad Street, Suite 604
New York, New York 10004

Dear Sir:

I am writing today to express my utter disgust with the views and opinions of the literary critic Mr. Harold Bloom. In his article titled, “Dumbing down American readers”, Bloom states that author Stephen King is undeserving of the Medal for Distinguished Contribution that was awarded to him by NBF. Bloom asserts, “The decision to give the National Book Foundation’s annual award for distinguished contribution to Stephen King is extraordinary, another low in the shocking process of dumbing down our cultural life”. As one of the ordinary people, I personally take offense to that statement because it appears that Bloom’s assertions are not only misguided, but they do not express the views of other well-known and respected writers.

In his quest to belittle King and his writings, Bloom has seemingly redefined the criterion required in order to receive the Medal for Distinguished Contribution. The NBF has determined that the recipient is, “A person who has enriched our literary heritage over a life of service, or corpus of work”, in which King has accomplished. Bloom has, however, amended this determination to include his own personal views and opinions of who he believes should or should not receive the award.

Bloom also makes reference to various authors and their contributions, but he makes no mention of their views for or against King’s recognition for the award. In fact, Mr. Walter Mosley, who is touted as one of the most versatile and admired writers in America today, had this to say about Stephen King: “Mr. King’s novels are inhabited by people with everyday jobs and average bodies, people who have to try to find extraordinary strength when they’ve never been anything but ordinary”. These words alone speak volumes to the true contributions in which King has made in the literary world. I feel that Stephen King tries to uplift and motivate everyday people like myself. The same people who are forced to deal with all kinds of situations in their lives.  While they continue to maintain and be a part of this crazy world we live in today.

In closing, I would like to add, that I stand in agreement with the NBF’s board of directors and their selection of Stephen King as recipient of the Medal for Distinguished Contribution. I also feel that Mr. King is well deserving of this recognition and should be honored for inspiring many ordinary people to continue to do extraordinary things.

Sincerely,

JLB

 

Introduction

Hello! I am jeffrey9961 and I am a college student at a large community college located on the east coast. This is my first blog and it is for my first year english class. I am majoring in Industrial Technology and I enjoy watching sports. I am a huge fan of the Pittsburgh Steelers. My favorite movies would have to include SlingBlade, Forrest Gump  and Lady Killers  starring Tom Hanks. I am looking forward to sharing my views during this semester. Thanks for stopping by!